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Try to smooth out your read. Also, put some emphasis at end on “listen for free” – it’s exciting!

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Hi Caryn. I just want to second what Rosy said: use two distinct tones for right side and left side.

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Be sure on the Alaska spot that “our” doesn’t come out as “are”.

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Hi Tammy! I particularly like your voice in the 2nd half of Movie Gallery – it sounds very natural and likeable. The one thing I didn’t care for was your pitch on “p**f” – it just doesn’t seem to fit your otherwise warm take in this spot.

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Hi Bil-BO! Maybe it’s just me, but your initial “Hey…” kind of sounds like uncertainty, in the vein of “Hey uh…”. I also think you need to put more emphasis on AMSTEL LIGHT.

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Hi Salma! First thing is to be very careful not to “fall off” your words. Even after listening several times, I can’t really make out the word “fairy” the very first time you say it. Enunciate carefully, as “Ben and” sounds like “Ben un”.

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