[James]

I played about with this one. I’m not happy with it personally. Added some music from Looperman (credit to user:Rasputin), and EQ’d my voice to sound like an old movie. I don’t think my voice is a good match for this kind if voice work lol. The script was generated by ChatGPT.

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[James]

The delivery is great on both of them! You have a high noise floor and a bit of an echo, a little acoustical padding will cure this. This is really good. With a good warm up before your next practice script, your speech will sound even sharper. It’s an issue I have personally. Over all, great start!

[James]

I have an east Texas accent and I’m working on making it less noticeable. I also have a mumble issue. Where can I improve on this?

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[James]

Sounds better then most commercials I hear on the radio! Quite good!

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[James]

Those sounded very good to me! I’d say play around with the emotion and see what comes of it. Do some mouth exercises as well, it does help a good deal. Over all, I liked them!

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