[Evalena Taylor]

What a rich, personable sound you have! I thought you started strong with that nice, relatable inflection. The slightly more dramatic changes in pitch after about 0:06 secs makes it feel a little less like a “real” conversation. You could try some visual exercises to really get into where you are, exactly who you’re talking to, and what kind of response you’re trying to get from them. That helps me a LOT. You have a great sound and I hope we continue to hear more from you!

[Evalena Taylor]

Intended audience for this one would be pre-k and maybe it’s a preview for a kids e-learning course. Would love some kind criticism!

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