[Erik B]

Hi Toque, I liked this read. The tone variation throughout the read was great. Also the read had a good pace to it. Good job.

[Erik B]

Hi Rogue1, this read was a lot of fun. Listening to this clip put a big smile on my face, and made me break out my checkered black and white slip on Vans. The energy was really good. The only critique I have is “REALLY” and “AMC” should have been hit more. But overall this was fun, good job.

[Erik B]

Howdy Svenbot, I liked the read, you had the sinister tone down. The only suggestion I have is to not rush it. Good job.

[Erik B]

Hi Burdahgirl. The pacing of your read was very good. I noticed the overemphasis on “private payments”. To help “get out of your head” step away from the mic, before reading a sentence with a troublesome word or words, raise your arms to your side and take two deep breathes, then go back to the mic and deliver the line. Overall good job.

[Erik B]

Hi Toque, I really liked this read. Your energy and tone fit the copy well. Great job.

[Erik B]

Hi Mary, I liked the pacing of your read. Also you hit key words very well. In addition I like how you differentiated “coordinate, accesorize, and help” . The only critique I have is, I heard a pause in the first sentence of the second paragraph,”private label designs to our”. But overall you did a good job.

[Erik B]

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[Erik B]

Toque,

I like your performance. The tone and and pace are spot on. The only critique I have is watch out for unnecessary pauses, I only heard one between economy and jobs. But overall good job.

[Erik B]

Mary, the pace of your read was good. In addition you enunciated clearly. The copy is for a fight gym, your energy level needs to match the copy. But overall good read.

[Erik B]

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Mary, the pace of your read was good. In addition you enunciated clearly. The one thing I noted was that the energy didn’t fit the copy. The read is for a gym, your tone needs to have more umph and energy. But overall good read.

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