[Erik B]

Hi Skinnydog, I haven’t yet trained in narration VO, so I’m just going to provide feedback for the FedEx commercial read. I enjoyed the commercial read. The tone of the read is solid as is the tempo. You differentiate well between sentences, and the items in the list. Lastly the recording quality sounds good. Great job.

[Erik B]

Hi everybody. Please feel free to provide feedback on my performance and recording quality. Thank you.

Clem the Prospector

Howdy folks, Clem the old prospector here to tell you how you can strike it rich, and you don’t even need a pick and shovel, all you need is a new Quick Pick from the Nebraska Lottery. With 6 chances to win, odds are you’ll do better than me diggin in this old mountain here. The new Quick Pick, from the Nebraska Lottery.

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[Erik B]

Hi docr15,

I really enjoyed this read. The tone fits the copy perfectly. Also the pacing of your read is great. In addition you hit the key words nicely. Good job.

[Erik B]

Hi Katelyn, I liked both reads, and you can tell the difference which read is informative and which read is upbeat and cheerful. I like the second read better. Cooking is a fun activity which involves food, which we all love. I think a happy/cheerful tone is better suited for the copy. But the audition is for a cookbook in which a constant cheerful read will be hard to maintain, although I’m not certain because i’m still a beginner. Also the recording quality and pace of both reads are very good. Great job.

[Erik B]

Hello everybody. I’m looking for feedback on my performance and recording quality. Thanks.

Corona Refresca

Corona Refresca brings the flavor and the feeling of the tropics straight to you. Crisp, flavorful, and never too sweet, Corona Refresca is a new premium, alcohol-spiked refresher, available in Passionfruit Lime, Guava Lime and Coconut Lime. Corona Refresca. Bring the Tropics.

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[Erik B]

Hi Svenbot. I like the energy and pace of the read. I think you hit the keywords nicely. The recording quality sounds solid to me. Good job.

[Erik B]

I really liked this performance. Your tone fit the copy well, and the recording quality is excellent. Good job.

[Erik B]

Hello everybody. Please feel free to provide feedback on my performance and recording quality. Thank you.

Campbells Chunky Chili

Introducing Campbell’s Chunky Chili with Beans – four delicious, hearty varieties loaded with succulent, seasoned meat. It’s the perfect pre-game warm-up.

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[Erik B]

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2020 Ford Explorer

To be the greatest exploration vehicle of all time…you need intelligent 4 wheel drive…
An active terrain management system…and the most available driver assist technology of any vehicle in it’s class…
The completely redesigned 2020 Ford Explorer…built Ford proud.

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[Erik B]

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Florida’s Natural

Florida’s Natural Premium Brand orange juice is made just from our fresh oranges, not from concentrate. And it’s the only leading brand owned by a small co-op of growers, so only our personal best goes into every carton. We own the land, we own the trees, and we own the company. Florida’s Natural. It’s as close to the grove as you can get.

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