[elizbrooksbell]

The pacing was really good, however I would recommend a lead-In so it doesn’t sound like you’re just reading it of the page. Great job!

[elizbrooksbell]

You hit the key words really well! Great work!

[elizbrooksbell]

You sound super good! My only note is that there is some background noise, but that can be easily fixed. Great job!

[elizbrooksbell]

I like the sound of your voice a lot! One thing I would say would be to cut out some of the pauses, but other than that, great job!

[elizbrooksbell]

I agree with the pauses thing, but I also thought you sounded great! It sounded like a real commercial!

[elizbrooksbell]

Really good work! The only thing I would mention would be the pacing, sometimes you seem to be going a bit fast, and other times too slow. I would just say to be more consistent!

[elizbrooksbell]

I love your accent! The only thing I would say would be to put a little more emotion into the reads, maybe try adding in a lead in? Great work!

[elizbrooksbell]

Wow! The American Airlines one was so good! I felt like I could hear you smiling, and I felt like I was actually on an airplane!

[elizbrooksbell]

I think it sounds super good! One thing I would say is that when hitting the key words, you might want to try blending them in a little more with the other words, if that makes sense. Other than that, you sounded great!

[elizbrooksbell]

Sounds great! I agree that drinking water is super helpful.

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