[Elise Duke]

Hi everyone! I’d love to get your feedback on these two samples. Your time and input are much appreciated 🙂 Thank you!

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[Elise Duke]

Hi Courtney! Great reads! I thought the American Express read sounded a bit fast, so maybe try slowing that one down a bit.

I really liked Honey Bunches of Oats! I think you added emphasis on the right words and it made me excited to want to go get some Honey Bunches of Oats cereal 🙂

[Elise Duke]

Hi Kim! I love your tone of Cool Cool! Especially the playfulness of the trombone. Excellent!

I agree with Mark, that the Cod Heads read is very fast. Imagine you are having a conversation with someone to make it sound a bit more relaxed, and I think it’ll be great!

[Elise Duke]

Hello! I think you have a great voice, especially for these types of reads! I think the first 3 lines could sound a bit more relaxed and maybe leave the listener in a bit suspense wanting to know more. The “Supreme Scream!” part sounds great!

[Elise Duke]

Thank you for the feedback, Tom! I get so caught up in focusing on not messing up that I lose sight of pretending I’m speaking to someone to make it sound more conversational. I appreciate it!

[Elise Duke]

Thank you so much @garprocks! I appreciate the feedback. Now I hear the “didju” as well and will definitely work on my pronunciation more.

[Elise Duke]

Hi everyone! First time feedback submitter, here 🙂 Please let me know your thoughts on the below samples. I’d love feedback on my tone, tempo, and overall reading. Thank you, I appreciate it!

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