[Earthbul]

Re-Posting Planet Earth’s “Grasslands” due to faulty editing.
Don’t drink and edit folks LOL

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I agree with Terry. I sense an extremely low hiss. Great read.

[Earthbul]

It’s not a race. Take some time to sell me on it. More inflection. You’ve got a nice voice. Use it to it’s full potential.

[Earthbul]

I agree on the 4 kids spot. Although I felt it could have had more “smile” on it. As for the Advil spot i 110% on the tone. It threw me off a bit as well. The pauses should be tightened up as well. I enjoy the sound of your voice and your inflections. Keep em coming !

[Earthbul]

Great breath control. I felt that after the strong opening line that the second line should have had a more subdued delivery.
Overall I thought the pacing and energy was spot on. Nice job.

[Earthbul]

Planet Earth “Grasslands”

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I totally hear what your saying. And saying it again out loud really reinforces it. Thanks for the feedback, Luke !!

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Any and all feedback is welcomed and appreciated. Thanks !

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I felt the enthusiasm could have been dialed down just a bit. That being said I enjoy your voice and like your pauses. Just breathe a little bit and relax.

• This reply was modified 2 years, 8 months ago by Earthbul.
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Comments and critiques are welcomed and appreciated.

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