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American Tire Supply practice read
Put a little more pep in my step.
I was in a b****r of a Monday mood but I had fun with recording and editing this one.
Any thoughts on how to improve upon it are welcomed.

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I enjoyed listeng to your delivery on the Deluth read. Perfect fit. Didn’t feel the same about Acura. You didn’t sound comfortable and it didn’t flow. Also a bit of mouth noise in that one as well. That being said I’d love to hear you do a food or travel piece. You have an awesome folksy delivery. Great work.

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Just experimenting with mixing at the moment.
Not sure if the music is overpowering or under.
Thoughts ?

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Slowing it down a bit and putting more emphasis on certain words could really bring this up a notch.
You have a very pleasant sound to your voice.

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Practice read.

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Thoughts on recording quality ? Was also wondering if the music mix is adequate ?
Thanks in advance

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Narration read. Far from perfect. Thoughts ?

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I agree with Mike. I’d love to hear this one redone with those critiques in mind. I think you’re going to hit it out of the park !

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Comments and critiques are welcomed.

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It sounded pretty stilted to me. The emphasis on certain words felt a little off.

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