Earthbul
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I agree with Mike. I’d love to hear this one redone with those critiques in mind. I think you’re going to hit it out of the park !
Everything seemed to end on an upswing. I didn’t hear much inflection throughout the read.
Sounded to positive considering you’re talking about folks going though some really tough times.Yeah, it’s difficult finding our niche. I still attempt reads that I know I’m not geared for. It’s good practice. As for the sibilance it’s a b***h lol I’ve been messing mith my settings all weekend as well as playing with the de-esser and de-clicker that I just installed on Audacity. Which daw do you use ?
I’m hearing alot of sibilance in this. I like the sound of your voice. But this not the copy to showcase it. You sound detached from the basketball lines if that makes sense. Any copy I read I always try to find some attachment to it. To relate it to my own personal experience. I’d love to hear some other copy that really resonates with you.
Thanks Bill. I did apply the de-clicker to this one. It eliminated most of them except for a couple of stubborn ones.
Took Alex S’s advice and lengthened the pauses slightly. Also cleaned up the clicks and mouth noises as much
as Audacity allows. I also bumped up the volume of the music bed. Any comments or critiques welcomed.Hi,
I felt the pacing was a little more fluid on the first read. The second read not so much. I felt your diction was fine on both although the audio felt muffled. I also felt that the first read sounded more conversational. I enjoy the sound of your voice.I fully agree on the mouth noise. Hoped the music would distract from it in earlier versions lol I also feel the pauses should be longer in spots. I enjoy narration but I’m more comfortable with an upbeat commercial read. As for audio, I’m always tinkering with audacity settings to find the sweet spot. Thanks again for your take on it. I appreciate it.
