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Hi everyone! I really appreciated the helpful feedback everyone gave last time and thought, maybe y’all could help me refine this one!

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Thanks a million,
Dee

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Thanks so much suecat! I really appreciate your feedback – especially on the volume.

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Thank you! Have you worked with my coach Jenn? LOL you’ve reminded me of one of her notes that I need more work on – try to have a person in mind who I’m talking to. I really appreciate your feedback 🙂

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Thanks so much! You’re right – it’s so hard to drop my accent. I’ll definitely try what you’ve suggested.

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Hi everyone! I’m new to the Edge Studio VO demo program and excited to see what yall have to say about these readings 🙂

Starbucks: We’ve been told that perfect mornings exist for the lucky few. That morning people own the waking hours. But the truth is mornings belong to all of us. and while your morning might look like this. Or this. Or even this. Your mornings are what you make them. All it takes is saying Yes. Starbucks. Morning. Yes.

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Happy weekend,
Devon

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Hi Christophe! Your voice reminds me of that classic radio timbre. These were great 🙂
For Amelia Earhart this is great overall! A nice added touch could be a shift in the tone/feel a the last sentence to match the idea that there was more to Amelia than meets the eye.
Jazz: I like the great variation in pitch that you use! Adding a bit of change in volume could add a bit more variety in how you emphasize the different aspects of music. For example, maybe softer for “selfless” or with less vocal fry for “rich”.
Company website: I really enjoyed this one and felt a bit like I know Bob. And that led to me trusting your quick shift into the hard facts. Great work!
~Devon

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Hi Jimmy! You really have a very trustworthy voice 🙂

I enjoyed this one the most. I’d recommend picturing who you’re talking to throughout the reading to really emphasize how you make this feel like a conversation or a narration of the viewer’s own thought. However, casual and conversational really suits you!

The Company Website Greeting sounds a bit like you’re chuckling at Bob at the beginning and I enjoyed that quite a bit. The pace on this one could be sped up a bit but you had me picturing a commercial with this one.

On your reading of the Social Security script – your annunciation is perfect and I really appreciate the time you take to pause. I’d recommend catching the down pitch at the end of some sentences and speeding up the reading a bit.

Hope you find this helpful!

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