[Don Sack]

Greetings!
Posting two: A redo of The Wall Street Journal and a script for a Mercy Health spot.
Tempo, Tone, Pitch, Volume; Sound quality?

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[Don Sack]

Thank You all! Great feedback! Funny….the feedback from each of you….where have I heard that before???….AH! From my Coach!! LOL!!
Got to get that to sink in!!

[Don Sack]

Greetings All!
Two submissions: Wall Street Journal
Part of my “homework” is to slow myself down and learn to “make my mouth do what I want it to do”!
Please comment on Tempo, Volume, Pitch, Tone and Diction?
WSJ EDIT is my natural voice, Wall Street Journal#3 I embellished to sound more “authoritative”(?)
Thanks!
Don (ps: I am my own worst critic!!)

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[Don Sack]

Hey Tom! My humble thoughts? Enunciation and clarity of words; popping p’s? Perhaps slow the pace to allow for clarity of some words? Fresh voice!!
Don S.

[Don Sack]

Thanks Jason, so appreciate the feedback. This was my pick of three I did (I title and save everything).
Don

[Don Sack]

Thanks so much John! We shall see what Art has to say. LOL, it took a a bunch of takes until I realized I was my own worst critic and to heck with it, just submit the d**n things!
Don

[Don Sack]

Yet one more for “home work”!

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Bil-Bo!
Ha! You’ve got to be a “ringer”! Those two productions were great!!

[Don Sack]

Hey All!
Submitting two scripts for your listening pleasure and feedback of course! My homework for Art
Don Sack @ 2105 Studios

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