HEY ALL!
PICKING UP ON SOME MAJOR SLACK!
PUTTING THESE TWO OUT FOR YOUR CONSIDERATIONS!
MORE TO COME AS I AM GIVING MYSELF A SWIFT KICK IN THE REAR!
THANKS.
Hey Cat!
Sure, you will mess with your audio software and equipment set up and improve the audio, takes time and Edge courses can help. Unless the script was written as we hear it, my suggestion would be to enunciate, be clear with words especially the ending of words; slow down and relax.
Rock On!
Hey John!
Are you kidding me!! Your accent and Jaguar!! Sold! But; I did this piece as well, my take on your read would be to be a bit more driven (no pun intended), tougher perhaps? A Jag is performance and speed as well as luxury.
The other two, nice, a little less “stiff upper lip” and those p’s and consonants are popping out.
Rock On!
Hey Hh!
Hmmm, what do I know….check your work before you submit it, NY Life cut out; the volume on Atlanta was too low. Whatever soft ware you use, play with it and learn it; Edge offers courses in several soft wares.
Slow way down and relax. As my instructor hammers into me, find the lists in the piece and differentiate them via tone. Talk naturally and try to imagine another person speaking the words to you.
Rock On!
Hey C, what do I know….but…the first spot seems to have a lot of “sssss” with the words starting with s; #2 is just great in my book! My coach has me concentrating on slowing down the reads to help train my mouth to “do what my brain wants.” I swear I’ve already heard your voice on TV!!