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Nice read! the only feedback I have is to possibly put more emphasis on “rich and delicious taste”

[debbyc]

Hi there. Who is your audience? Practice speaking in a conversational way in educating your audience.

[debbyc]

I agree with Earthbul. I would like to hear you speed up the pace a bit.

[debbyc]

Hi all. This is a narration recording. All feedback is appreciated! Thanks in advance!

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Hi Krista. I love your voice..very clear and your pronunciation of the words and your pace is great. I would work on making it conversational. Who are you talking to about New York and Hudson Yard?

[debbyc]

Hi all, I’ve uploaded another practice script. I have been working on clarity and sounding more conversational rather than reading. Any feedback is greatly appreciated. Thanks!

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Hi there, this script felt as though you were reading rather than sharing information. I do like your tone and the pace in which you read a script is wonderful.

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ScottCarr I loved this read! Your pace was great. It was as if you were sharing this important information directly to me. Great job!

[debbyc]

Thank you Keith Paul. I appreciate your feedback!

[debbyc]

Hi all! I have uploaded a couple of narration reads and would appreciate any feedback that you have. I am hoping to sound conversational and sincere on the Allstate Insurance read. The pre boarding read…any and all feedback is appreaciated. Thanks in advance!

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