[Dbryson69]

what’s to say sounds great both copies

[Dbryson69]

hey so critiquing is a part of my homework so I will just say the american airlines sounds a little robotic toward the end
and the fish boil can slow down a bit so I have time to feel the buttery flavors I am going to be tasting when its all done and ready to eat
otherwise good read

[Dbryson69]

I actually could see your sad puppy dog face listen to your read maybe a little slower is the only thing I could think of if I had to critique it but good work.

[Dbryson69]

Daniella New to the VO feedback forum I uploaded 2 versions of the same copy please feel free to give me all the feedback you can

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