[Dante M.]

That was the tone I was going for in the second audio clip, but I felt very unnatural doing it, and it reflected in my work. I can’t wait to go over this one with my coach.

[Dante M.]

Hello everyone!

I was instructed by the talented Art Bruder to share my takes on three example scripts I found in the edge library. The first one is a nutritious breakfast cereal ad, the second one is a history channel documentary, and the third one is an educational explainer video. Hit me hard with the feedback!

I had a particularly hard time with the second script, I can’t quite pinpoint why. I’m sure you all can give me feedback on it though!

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