[Dante M.]

Good evening everyone, I have three more scripts that I’m interested in sharing! As always, I appreciate extreme criticism!

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[Dante M.]

Appreciate the feedback!

[Dante M.]

Hello everyone, it’s been a while! I’ve come back with three more varying commercial scripts that I practiced on. Criticism is highly encouraged!

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[Dante M.]

Hello all! I have 3 more scripts I’d like constructive feedback on. The first one is a documentary, the second one is a restaurant ad, and the third one is a Ziploc commercial.

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[Dante M.]

Nevermind this post, I made an error.

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[Dante M.]

Much appreciated! I’m glad I’m improving.

[Dante M.]

Hello everyone, I have another three scripts for everyone to analyze and critique. As always, I pick the scripts I have the hardest time with to get the best feedback.

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[Dante M.]

You have THE voice for that script. I would cast you for the role for sure.

[Dante M.]

Thank you very much for the feedback! I appreciate it.

[Dante M.]

Good evening everyone! This time around I have 3 scripts. The first 2 are corporate explainer videos with different themes, while the third one is a documentary narration. I feel like I did the best on the first one and the worst on the second one. Don’t hold back with criticism!

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