[Debbie]

Hello everyone, looking for some feedback on a practice narration read. No technical notes though please!
thanks

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[Debbie]

Hello everyone!
I’m working on being conversational and my glottal stops, so wanted to practice on copy that has key words starting with vowels.
I’m a little congested so you may be able to hear it. No tech notes please, all other feedback welcome!

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[Debbie]

Hi Nikka! Great read, you have a really nice tone. There are some moments in the copy where you could be more conversational. I find that making the effort to keep smiling through the read (even when it feels super weird) helps a lot for me, so that may be something to try if you haven’t already.

[Debbie]

I’m working on being more conversational for narration and tutorials. No technical notes please, but any other feedback is appreciated!

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Hello! Uploading some narration practice. I’m working on diction and pacing for conversational reads, but am open to any other feedback.
Thanks!

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