D M Ulmer
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Hi DS,
The recording quality of this take does not have that “shuuuuuu” feedback, or sound, or whatever it was of the last one. Much better.
I liked this. Sounds as if you are talking about your friend Jerry. Good pacing. Tone. Dynamics of your voice were good. The listener becomes engaged and wants to go with you on this journey through Jerry’s bio.
Nice job!
DawnHi DS,
Your tone and pacing match your content. Nice quality to your voice which promotes confidence in the listener to relax and go along with the prompts. Very clear and welcoming.
Technically there is something going on while you are speaking. You sound a bit echoey (is that a word?) and like a soft shuuuuuu sound going on. It is dead silence in between. Can hear definite difference between the two settings.
DawnbHi EP,
Felt as if you were speaking just to me. Like we are sitting at a table having a cup of coffee. You are remembering how you now see the value of taking time off. Don’t feel like you are selling. It’s a meaningful memory. Something which stood out to me was the very slight pause between “travelers” and “find”. Would have felt more natural to flow into one another. Just the thing I need to work on too.
DawnHi Elvie,
Nice. I thought the pacing was improved from the first read. There is emphasis now on the things which make Venice unique. Your words are clear. Liked “each hour, each minute.” Keep it up!
DawnHi Tom,
ThanK you very much for your feedback. I appreciate your attention to the pauses. It is frustrating to me that I continue to do that. I will work on speaking with better flow. Pausing only at the periods. Thanks to for taking me back to the place of what my friend has just said to which I am responding.
Again, thanks so much.
DawnAnother practice at an ad. Does it sound enough as if I am encouraging my friend to try the paint service?
Thank you!Hi Elvie,
You have an ethereal quality to your voice. Light and airy. It is lovely. Some of the words here could benefit from more emphasis. You give some emphasis on no one, ever, and dazzling light. They could take more emphasis. The word “thousand” would sound more of what it means by sounding it out a bit more. The delivery is smooth. If there were video along with the promo the pacing may need to be a bit slower.
You do make visiting Venice sound like a lovely prospect.
DawnHi Bil-Bo,
Your unique voice and accent are used well in both pieces. Good pacing in both. The Welch’s is good at a bit slower take. You sound as if you may work at the orchard. The second you pick up the pace, which is appropriate for the content. The friendly, neighbor like quality of your voice lessens the intimidation factor for a financial service. There are people who are nervous about contacting a financial company. You make them sound approachable. Nice, smooth deliveries.
DawnHi Dena,
You are quite clear. You accomplish what they require. It is straightforward. The message is delivered. Good audio.Keep it up through the whole piece!
