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Continued practice! Thanks for all of the comments on previous posts- all comments are welcome, especially those focused on performance. Thanks!
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Very nicely done! The pacing and tone fit the copy perfectly for me, and as far a choosing copy you picked one that your voice suits well and would likely give you a solid shot at booking the job. Good luck on the demo!
Testing out recording in my completed vocal booth for the first time! Still waiting on the actual mic/setup I will be using to be delivered, but any comments focused on performance or sound quality would be much appreciated. Thanks!
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Experience the power of many.Very nice work! I’ll back up the other comments that the e-learning copy in particular worked perfectly with your voice, pacing, and natural smile. The one that I think could use a quicker pacing is the Enfamil copy; each individual line was spot on but in some areas there was almost a 1.5 second gap in between lines, and in a quick 15 second spot those would need to be shortened a bit.
Almost finished with my vocal booth build, so I’ll have more time for posting on here with continued practice and exploration of different copy! All comments are appreciated, especially those focused on performance and delivery. Thanks!
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Nice work! The difference between the two is very clear- you nailed the pacing of the second read in particular, so perhaps bringing a more conversational pacing to the first on while keeping the factual, straightforward tone would suit it even more?
Continued practice! Working with different copy and honing my performance skills, so any performance related comments would be great- although any comments are appreciated! I’m also working on decreasing the time needed to get a recording I am happy with, so part of this was an experiment to give myself fewer takes to get it right to hone my auditioning skills.
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Nice work as a whole! One area that could be improved though in my opinion would be the pacing for Peet’s coffee. You did well interpreting the quirky copy and it sounded great in your voice! But if that was a 30 second ad you would definitely have to pick it up a little bit.
The lists worked great, your choice of words to highlight was effective and the rest of the copy had good pacing. Nice work!
Continued practice; all comments are appreciated, especially regarding my performance. Thanks!
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