Courtney Feiman
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Thanks for the feedback and critique!
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These are really lovely reads. Strong pacing and a nice natural sound. I’d say for the Movie Gallery and Waterpik ones give the end more of an ending. It sounded a little open ended. Like there was more going to be said.
Hello hello!
I tried posting this earlier, but I don’t think it went through. If there are multiple posts, I apologize. A little homework practice. Thank you for your feedback!
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