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  • in reply to: Feedback Forum #63877
    Chris Bookless
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    Hello, all. Attached are homework assignments from coaching. I look forward to your feedback and thanks in advance!

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    in reply to: Feedback Forum #63876
    Chris Bookless
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    Good job. I’d say both pieces could be slowed down; don’t rush. For the first one you want the listener to take the time to follow your instructions. For the second you want the listener to be able to take in what they’re looking at.

    Also on the meditation track breathe with the listener.
    “Feel yourself breathing in” (slow breath in) “and feel your self breathing out” (slow breath out)

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #63875
    Chris Bookless
    Participant

    Hey there! I think they’re fine but to be honest I don’t think they sound very different. As far as your interpretation it’s almost there. I think you’re just missing a little something. Try it as though you’re letting someone in on a secret.

    There’s a hum in the background. Maybe an AC or furnace? Also, I can hear the room a bit.

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #63874
    Chris Bookless
    Participant

    Hi, Chas! You’ve got a great voice! Your levels sound good as far as I can tell but I hear some room reflection. Also a bump around the 6 sec point. You sound like you understand the material but it sounds like you’re reading it. You seem to fall into a rhythm. Forget the punctuation. Focus on how you want the listener to respond. Really picture that beautiful imagery and let it move you! You can get it!

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