[Cheechman]

This is my third set for the 1 demo homework.

I am submitting two of each.

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[Cheechman]

This is my second set for the 1 demo homework.

I am submitting two of each.

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[Cheechman]

Attached are 2 reads for my homework on the 1 demo course.

Please comment good or bad to let me know if I’m on the right track

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[Cheechman]

Integral was pronounced great. I say it that way too.
Great voice.
Would work on hiliting the correct words a little.
Maybe try to read it several different ways and listen to all to find the right one.

Overall great read!

[Cheechman]

Need more excitement for Crayola.
Sounds like you are reading right from the script.
I don;t know if you read this a couple times to memorize but might want to try.

[Cheechman]

WOW….great range. I like the over-the-top style and enjoy performing that style.
The wine read was great too
You hilied theproducts really nice.

[Cheechman]

Need to work on the slurring of certain words. Add more excitement and less hi nots.
Very articulate and good pace.

[Cheechman]

Solfullmoon was very monotone and sounded like you were reading the script.
Needs more excitement

[Cheechman]

Need to hilite Motel 6 more.
no emotion in the read.
Voice sounds good.

[Cheechman]

Great read, work on hiliting the product name and its benefits. Seem to trail off when saying the product.
great voice

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