[Cheechman]

Sounds good, but more inflection (excitement) in yuor voice would help. Use it to highlight the key words

[Cheechman]

Thanks

[Cheechman]

This is the last one required for my homework.
I appreciate all your patience listening to me read.

Moving on to class #2!

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[Cheechman]

This one has different styles.
Personally, I like the 3rd one best.

Let me know

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[Cheechman]

Too much slurring.
Ended with a question and needs to have the key words punched up a little. Make them a point of interest is what I mean. I’ve attached my read for comparison

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[Cheechman]

Alot more energy.

I tend to go into the “over the top am disc jockey” voice for these.

[Cheechman]

A little sing Songy for my tastes.

May try to hold the highs a little.

[Cheechman]

Do you utilize a pop filter?

The S sound is very strong.

Other than that, I think all sounded pretty good!

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The attached ae submitted for feedback for my demo class.
Any and all comments are appreciated

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[Cheechman]

Thanks, I appreciate the comments and will take them to heart

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