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Here is another one for comments.

ON all I like the ones with a 2 after …lol

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Need more emotion, excitement, in the read.

I have the same problem and it’s hard to work on.

The 2nd and 4th read were my favs.

[Cheechman]

Are you using a “pop” filter?

The letter s is very noticeable.

Otherwise, they sound good.

[Cheechman]

Here are the other 2 from the previous post.
Don’t know why they didn’t attach.

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I’m uploading 3 sets of 2 each for my second coaching session.
All comments will be taken seriously and are completely appreciated.

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You have a very soothing voice….
Try not to go up and down in tone so much, a little sing Songy for me.
Only hilight the right words not as much as you did.

Overall i thought they were really good.

[Cheechman]

Would recommend checking which words to hilite in the script.
I thought some that were hilited should not have been so much and some should have been more.
Great voice!

[Cheechman]

I thought Betty Crocker lacked sincere emotion, something I have a big problem with, by the way…lol
The best one for me was the movie read.
Very natural and hit the key words great.

[Cheechman]

Need to smooth it out. Kinda trails off at the ends of thoughts too.

Way more emotion on the key words

[Cheechman]

Need to hilight the key words with more excitement or tone.
Less reading and more feeling.
Good job

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