Chad4674
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I like both reads. different perspective on each. As Sue mentioned the first one sounded light with personality. The Second read sounded like a defensive personality like “I’m preparing for battle!” LOL! both were really good! Keep it up!
Hello Everyone! Working on a commercial script. I would love to hear feedback on delivery. I will also attach the script for your convenience:
Introducing SRX, Cadillac’s all-new performance utility that raises the bar inside and out. Inside: SRX offers seating for seven and the UltraView roof, which gives first- and second-row passengers an unprecedented open-air riding experience. Outside: SRX has available Magnetic Ride Control, the world’s fastest-reacting suspension system. The result is maximized road contact that allows the driver to feel every S-curve and the thrill of every straightaway. The praise is high. So is the bar.
thank you very much Shmuel! Yes, the jif commercial I was doing some experimenting with my sound space. Thanks for the feedback!
Hello Everyone!
Wanted to add two more commercial scripts. Please take a moment to review each. I welcome all feedback. Thx!
Hi Julie,
the last one definitely hit home as I too have bought a timeshare to never use it. 🙂 all sounded good however I hear a “click” at the end. That may be something for editing just to make sure that’s not included in your recording. Overall good work!
I really like your voice however I hear an echo in the background which made it a little hard to understand. specifically when you said this line I needed to play it over: “The Waterlase uses technology for a variety of dental procedures, one or more of which you require”.
overall pace was good enough from me to follow along. great job.
Hello Everyone,
Please review my recent commercial script for my latest homework assignment. Thank you.
