You have such a soothing voice. Great audio quality too! I guess if I had to nitpick I’d say to draw out the word “lows” a little less so that the thought becomes more cohesive.
You’ve got great rhythm and pitch in both of these samples. In the first one I did notice a little microphone bump sound at the end so I would just be mindful of that. For the second one, I might take a half second longer between “championship shape” and “you’ll find” so that it has space to breathe and become two distinct thoughts. Sounds great otherwise. Good luck with your demo:)
This reply was modified 3 years, 3 months ago by ceciliashaw.
Hi everyone,
My coach assigned me to upload an audition-style track with a slate at the beginning, followed by the same script performed in two different styles. Let me know what you think!
you have a beautiful soothing voice, well suited for narration. my one piece of feedback would be to keep the same energy throughout the read–it seemed like you were rushing a bit at the end, you got a little quieter and the tone got a bit less dynamic. other that that, excellent work!