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OPEN TO FEEDBACK GUYS! THANKS!
AT ALMOND BREEZE, WE ONLY USE CALIFORNIA GROWN BLUE DIAMOND ALMONDS IN OUR ALMOND MILK. AND WE’RE PROUD OF THAT. BUT THE WHOLE CARING AND NURTURING PART? THAT IDEA WE BORROWED FROM NATURE. BLUE DIAMOND ALMOND BREEZE, THE BEST ALMONDS MAKE THE BEST ALMOND MILK.
You have a very nice sophisticated quality to your voice so I think it works well with luxury product ads. I think your voice may be too “expensive” sounding for a Nissan ad, perhaps a luxury car brand like Mercedes Benz perhaps. Also because of the quality of your voice I don’t think you have to overdo it on line like “Where lush green palms line wandering paths.”
Great work!
A few practice scripts.
RECYCLING
I don’t know about you, but I like our planet a lot! And one of the easiest ways we can help protect the Earth is by recycling. That’s where instead of throwing things like plastic in the trash, you put them in a special bin so they go to a kind of factory to be reused. You’ve probably recycled things like plastic bottles before. There might even be a recycling bin in the room you’re in right now! Recycling is important because it helps keep the Earth clean, especially from trash made of plastic.
RUNNNG SHOES
There is no perfect running shoe, partly because no two feet are alike, even on the same person. Still, top brands can be comfortable, safe, and effective running mates — if you know what to look for. This video gives you some practical guidelines to help you find shoes that will serve you well in the long run. If in doubt, don’t buy. Shoes should feel just right in the store. Don’t count on improvements after they’re “broken in.” Take your time to buy. Try to shop when business is slow so you won’t feel embarrassed about trying on many pairs of shoes. Buying in haste is a good way to end up with poorly fitting shoes that can cause injuries.
Nice read. Only critique is that you may consider shortening the pauses a bit and maybe play with varying speed and pitch. Good work!
Hey everybody!
Trying to work on improving diction and adding variety. Feedback is appreciated as always!
Thanks!
9 PLANETS
About 12 billion years ago, scientists think, from a singular explosion, the universe was born. In those first moments, intensely hot hydrogen and helium raced outward – thinning, cooling, and clumping into vast, organized structures.
Within a few billion years, countless galaxies had emerged. Each one containing hundreds of billions of stars – constantly changing in cycles of birth, death and rebirth. In one of these galaxies, about 5 billions years ago, one average-sized star, our sun, captured in its gravitational field the gas and dust that would become 9 planets.OFFICIAL ALASKA PLANNING VIDEO
This Official Alaska Vacation Planning Video is filled with plenty of breathtaking scenes. But more important, it’s loaded with all the information you need for planning a trip to Alaska. Like when to go, what to wear, and what to see. So if you’ve got Alaska on your mind, you’re going to love this video. Let’s begin with snow sports. This is definitely the place. For cross-country and down-hill skiing. For snow boarding, tobogganing, and even ice fishing.
Working on my some motivational/healing reads. Feedback is always appreciated. Thanks
SOMETIMES THE END IS SUDDEN AND YOU ARE LEFT WITHOUT CLOSURE,
HEARTBROKEN AND UNPREPARED FOR SUCH A SHARP CHANGEFOR A WHILE, YOU LIVE WITH A MIND THAT IS HALF HERE
AND HALF FULL OF REGRET WONDERING “WHAT IF?”FOR A WHILE, YOUR HEART ONLY FEELS GRIEF AND YOUR MIND ONLY SEES GRAY
AND THEN LIFE STARTS TO CALL YOU BACK INTO ITS ARENA OF POSSIBILITY;
IT REMINDS YOU THAT ALL IS NOT LOST AND THAT EVEN THOUGH A CHAPTER ENDED, THERE IS STILL A LONGER STORY TO BE TOLDWITH TIME AND INTENTION, WOUNDS LOSE THEIR HEAVINESS,
HEALING FILLS THE TOUGH PARTS OF YOUR BEING,
AND YOU AWAKEN THE LIGHT OF LOVE WITHIN YOURSELFIN TIME, YOU WILL RETURN FULLY INTO THE PRECIOUS NOW WITH A HEART THAT FEELS REFRESHED AND READY TO MOVE FORWARD
Hey all!
Just an amateur trying to get in some practice and figure out my niches! Feedback is always appreciated! (The file got posted twice by accident).
WORDS. THEY CAN DO ANYTHING.
THEY CAN CALL IN A DOG AT NIGHT.
THEY CAN BRING COMFORT TO AN OLD FRIEND.
THEY CAN SAY HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO A GIRL WHOSE BALLOONS ARE SLOWLY SINKING.BUT SOMETIMES, WORDS CAN GET YOU INTO TROUBLE.
LIKE THE HUMAN RIGHTS ACTIVIST WHO WAS KIDNAPPED FOR STANDING UP TO GOVERNMENT CORRUPTION.
OR THE JOURNALIST SENTENCED TO 10 YEARS IN PRISON FOR SENDING AN EMAIL.
OR THE 1000S OF MEN AND WOMEN WHO ARE ARRESTED AND TORTURED, JUST FOR DEMANDING A FAIR ELECTION.NOW, WE NEED YOUR WORDS,
TO DEMAND JUSTICE, TO TAKE A STAND, AND TO OFFER HOPE TO PEOPLE AROUND THE WORLD, WHO ARE SILENCED FOR SIMPLY SPEAKING THEIR MINDS.WRITE A LETTER OR SPEAK OUT TODAY.
YOUR WORDS CAN LEAD TO THEIR FREEDOM.WORDS. THEY CAN DO ANYTHING.
Hi!
You have a very trustworthy sounding voice, which sounds great for this type of product!! Overall, I think you did a good job, especially
considering that some of these lines are a mouthful. Working on breath control (or trying to complete the longer lines in one breath if possible) may help add some extra smoothness and improve diction at the ends of sentences. Nice work!
