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Hi All,
Been working on my pacing and diction. Feedback is appreciated.
Thanks!
BENZ 2020 E-CLASS
A car that can actually see like a human.
Using stereoscopic cameras and even stopping itself if it has to.
The technology may be hard to imagine — but why you would want it, is not.
The 2020 E-class.
It doesn’t just see the future…
It is the future.USPS PSA
The US Postal Service wants 2 remind everyone this year 2 protect themselves from becoming victims of identity theft. Promptly remove incoming mail from your mailbox – and don’t give out passwords, pin numbers, or account numbers. 2 learn more, visit consumer.gov/ncpw
Hi All,
Been working on my pacing and diction. Feedback is appreciated.
Thanks!
BENZ 2020 E-CLASS
A car that can actually see like a human.
Using stereoscopic cameras and even stopping itself if it has to.
The technology may be hard to imagine — but why you would want it, is not.
The 2020 E-class.
It doesn’t just see the future…
It is the future.USPS PSA
The US Postal Service wants 2 remind everyone this year 2 protect themselves from becoming victims of identity theft. Promptly remove incoming mail from your mailbox – and don’t give out passwords, pin numbers, or account numbers. 2 learn more, visit consumer.gov/ncpw
Hi everybody!
Just practicing some commercial scripts. Feedback is always welcomed!
Thanks!
SNAPPLE:
Attention shoppers:those of you who are over in home improvements, and are looking for Snapple, please be aware, you will NOT find any of Snapple’s assortment of flavors in THAT department. We realize a tasty drink like Snapple Raspberry Iced Tea or Kiwi Strawberry Cocktail would, in fact, be a FINE improvement to any home. But technically, Snapple is a beverage. Therefore, we are left with no choice but to keep it in the beverage aisle. With that said, thanks for your cooperation. And happy shopping, from SNAPPLE.
MAYBELLINE:
This one is for the girls who make it happen… The ones who look in the mirror with confidence. Who apply passion to everything they do.
This is for the women with drive in their eyes… Who see obstacles as opportunities. And show the world their courage and creativity every day.
This is for every woman who looks in the mirror and sees the power of possibility. And if sometimes that mirror is clouded by doubt or insecurity… This is for the girls who know what to do.
Put on your strong face, your “nothing’s going to stop me” face. Stand tall and proud. Go out and make it happen.
Maybelline New York, Make it Happen.REPOST WITH SCRIPTS:
BOYS & GIRLS CLUB
PUT THIS CARD IN THE HANDS OF A CHILD AND THERE’LL BE NO ROOM FOR A GUN. A NEEDLE. OR A KNIFE. IT’S ONLY A PIECE OF PAPER, BUT THAT LITTLE MEMBERSHIP CARD HAS HELPED KEEP MILLIONS OF KIDS OFF DRUGS, OUT OF GANGS AND IN SCHOOL. TO LEARN HOW YOU CAN HELP THE BOYS & GIRLS CLUBS, CALL 1-800-854-CLUB. BOYS & GIRLS CLUBS OF AMERICA. THE POSITIVE PLACE FOR KIDS.
GEICO
THESE DAYS, IT SEEMS AS IF EVERY CAR INSURANCE COMPANY NEEDS A SYMBOL. THINGS LIKE A BLANKET OR A HAND. WELL, IF GEICO HAD A SYMBOL, IT WOULD SURELY BE THE FRONTAL LOBE OF THE CEREBRAL CORTEX. YOU SEE…IT’S HERE, DEEP WITHIN THE BRAIN, THAT NERVE IMPULSES FIGURE OUT, “HEY…IT’S SMARTER TO BUY CAR INSURANCE FROM GEICO.” OVER 10,000 DRIVERS SWITCH EACH WEEK! SO CALL FOR A FREE RATE QUOTE TODAY. YEP, THE BRAIN’S A GREAT SYMBOL. WE JUST CAN’T IMAGINE THE MEDULLA OBLONGATA ON OUR STATIONARY. CALL 1-800-4-GEICO. GEICO DIRECT, THE SENSIBLE ALTERNATIVE. NOT AVAILABLE IN
NEW JERSEY OR MASSACHUSETTS.Hey all!
Still trying to figure out what type of reads feel the most natural for me voice and personality. Feedback is appreciated!!
On both reads: You have a very sweet, lovely voice, therefore it tends to be quiet, you may want to check your levels. Also, you may want to play around with energy shifts throughout the script when it makes sense. Lovely work!
Hey everybody. Working on energy shifting in commercial reads. Feedback is always welcomed! Thanks!
WEELEARN
MOST OF US KNOW THERE ARE WAYS WE CAN IMPROVE… TO BE HEALTHIER… HAPPIER… MORE EFFECTIVE…
BUT KNOWING HOW TO IMPROVE IS A DIFFERENT MATTER.
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USING THE WEELEARN VIDEO LIBRARY, YOU CAN PROTECT YOUR BODY,
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TRY WEELEARN FOR YOURSELF TODAY.
WEELEARN – LEARNING THROUGH WATCHING.JCPENNEY
YOUR BRAIN HAS 2 SIDES.
THE RIGHT SIDE: CREATIVE, BUYS THINGS, HAS FUN.
THE LEFT SIDE: ORGANIZED, PRACTICAL, SAVES MONEY.
NOW JC PENNEY MAKES BOTH SIDES HAPPY.
IT’S THE BUY MORE, SAVE MORE SALE. IT’S SIMPLE, THE MORE YOU BUY, THE MORE YOU SAVE. 20 TO 30%.
SO USE YOUR HEAD. BUY MORE. SAVE MORE.
ONLY AT JC PENNEY.
Hi Everybody!
I’m now training on commercial reads.
Feedback is always appreciated!!!
Thanks!
FRANKLIN DISABILITY
YOU GROW UP LOOKING TO YOUR PARENTS AS YOUR PROVIDERS AND PROTECTORS. THEN ONE DAY, SOMETIMES QUITE SUDDENLY, THE SHOE’S ON THE OTHER FOOT. AS YOU YOURSELF GROW OLDER, HOW CAN YOU BE ASSURED THAT YOU WON’T BE FORCED TO DEPEND ON YOUR OWN CHILDREN FOR YOUR CARE AND SECURITY? IT’S SIMPLE. WE’RE THE FRANKLIN DISABILITY INSURANCE COMPANY. WE’RE CONTINUALLY LOOKING TOWARD THE FUTURE, SO YOU’LL BE PREPARED WHEN IT GETS HERE. FOR MORE INFORMATION, CONTACT YOUR BROKER. HERE’S TO A LONG LIFE.
