[bvalashi]

Hello! Please let me know what you think! I’m definitely trying to keep it friendly without making this sound too much like pitch for “why you should visit these theaters”. Thanks!

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[bvalashi]

Hi Daniel,

I really like the feeling you’re giving off with this. I can easily see a relaxing day at the beach based on your tone and pace. I really liked the way you said “where love…”. It brought another element to the second half of this that really made it work. Nice job!

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[bvalashi]

Hi Everyone! I’m brand new here and starting to build towards a Commercial demo reel. I’m looking forward to seeing all the ways in which I can improve. Thanks!

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[bvalashi]

I really liked the way your voice came across here. Definitely sounded like what you were going for. I agree that maybe delivering this a tad slower will only help the overall read and put even more emphasis on that “young professional” sound you were going for! Great work!

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