[Brad]

Hey All, newbie here, Looking to get some feedback on my homework. 🙂 Will take any comments!

Overall looking to hear:
1. When it seems like I’m pushing too much
2. Is my tone (specifically for Stanley and Ryobi) appearing conversational
3. I’ve been working on trying to lift my ends of sentences rather than my natural default of going down.

All comments welcome

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