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narrative hw

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there is a little bit of an echo in your recording and some of the words are a little rushed. Other than that it sounds good

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Only critique I would have would be when saying hundred it comes out a little bit like hunderd. I definitely have that problem a lot. Sounds great!

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Sounds great! Between “on’ and ‘discovery kids” might have been a little to long of a pause but that just my opinion

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There is a little white noise in the background. Other than that it sounds good!

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