[RoxyMel]

Thank you so much for your feedback Haley! I will play around with that. Much appreciated!

[RoxyMel]

Thank you so much, I will try it out. Much appreciated! 😉

[RoxyMel]

Meant “Hi there Meer”…spell correct might have changed it.

[RoxyMel]

I would appreciate any feedback. Thank you!

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[RoxyMel]

Hi there Mere, idk if is just me, but I am not seeing your audio post.
Maybe I missed something. Good luck with all your training & tasks btw!

[RoxyMel]

Hi Shaun Cruz, great ability to alter and vary you voice pitch! The second and third reads seemed well in tempo and smoothness, though I felt that in the first read for Amex it was a little rushed especially about two thirds of the way though it. Overall wonderful work especially considering this is your first submission!

[RoxyMel]

Hi Martina, you were able to read this in such a way that I could not stop listening – keeping the storytelling and suspense in tact. I think there were a couple of small words that may need a small edit, but really great job with this read, especially considering the legnth!

[RoxyMel]

Hi Mary, this is enjoyable because it sounds interesting, and your intonation is pleasant. I do hear your breaths in-between phrases which are subtly distracting and am not sure how or if that would be altered. But wonderful job on keeping the listener engaged!

[RoxyMel]

Feedback much appreciated, thank you

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[RoxyMel]

Nice and clear, liked your intonation on the cape cod submission & makes me want to go there!

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