[RoxyMel]

Feedback appreciated!
Thank you!

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[RoxyMel]

Great job Ilene! With the sesame st read, I Love the excitement in you voice! Just the one line that starts with now is not completely clear on the emphasis. I think the meaning of this sentence could be clearer depending on where you put the emphasis. But I love your work! & kids will want this if you hear your voice, I think.

[RoxyMel]

Feedback is much appreciated. Thank you so much

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[RoxyMel]

I enjoy your pronunciation. Just seems to me if you give slightly shorter pauses on comas and slightly longer for ends of sentences it might be even easier for the listener to follow along. I love this interesting topic your speaking about.

[RoxyMel]

Oh thank you so much. I will definitely look into that for the future. Thanks for the feedback.

[RoxyMel]

Just my phone app, why?
Thank you

[RoxyMel]

Hi, I appreciate any feedback, thank you!

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Love to hear feed back, thank you!

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[RoxyMel]

Hi! As far as the house with nobody in it goes, I like this.the middle part is particularly strong. I may have though the end was possibly a little too cheerful sounding for the meaning I interpreted.

[RoxyMel]

Very nice. Smooth. I like where you put your intonations and the texture of you voice matched well.

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