[RoxyMel]

Great job decofcards! You have a wonderful and smooth voice quality which I really like. I belive you could also vary you list a little on the list of the chevy’s attributes. I would say maybe just a sight more excitement too throughout. Really nice though! Especially considering how new you are to this!

[RoxyMel]

Hi again Slemay. On your second read foe Nike again super good job for a first time for you! I would say for me there is just a little too long of these micro pauses between phases and I feel you could even add just a little more excitement. Such a good job though for being so new to this! Keep it up!

[RoxyMel]

Hi Slemay. Great job for your first time!! I would say that it does sound a little to me like you are reading in some parts,also you can probably vary your list more (when listing the attributes of the vehicle). Keep up the good work!

[RoxyMel]

Hi all, I appreciate your feedback! I think this has a small hicup. thanks in advance!

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[RoxyMel]

Thank you so much for your feedback Gill! It means a lot!

[RoxyMel]

Thank you so much Lindsay! Your feedback is greatly appreciated!

[RoxyMel]

Thank you so much for your feedback Rusty!I really appreciate it!
I wasn’t sure what to do exactly as in the copy there is literally a period after the word place. Thank you again so much!

[RoxyMel]

Hi Gill, I love your voice quality and enunciation! In my opinion, I would probably speed this read up just a slight touch. Good work

[RoxyMel]

Sounds very smooth and I love your voice quality. If I had to give constructive feedback I would say maybe a little more variation in accentuating or highlighting parts of the copy 😉

[RoxyMel]

Dear All, I appreciate your feedback. Thank you!

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