[RoxyMel]

Hi again! Okay, now that I listened to the last All-State one I noticed that you did add the expression at the beginning, and I like that!

[RoxyMel]

Hi Hazaro. On the first All-State, once again I Love the quality of your voice. I really liked when you added in just a little more expression towards the end, and I would just say I think it would sound nice of you added some of that kind of expression towards the beginning as well. Great job 😉

[RoxyMel]

Hi Hazaro. On the Lowes read, I love the texture and style of your voice, I would just say perhaps you can vary the first several items on the “becomes” list a little more. 😉

[RoxyMel]

Great reads Jeff, on the second one I thought maybe it was just a touch fast in tempo…and maybe could use just a slight bit more intonation towards the end – to emphasize the humor. The fist one was nice and smooth. 😉

[RoxyMel]

Appreciate all your feedback! Thank you!

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[RoxyMel]

Like these both very much, love your tempo, intonation and expression and the quality of your voice, don’t have much constructive to give;-)

[RoxyMel]

Appreciate any feedback!
Thanks!

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[RoxyMel]

Very engaging voice Jeff! Very expressive, especially towards the end. If I had to dig deep to find constructive feedback, I would say maybe bring some more of that expression in towards the beginning as well. Excellent read.

[RoxyMel]

Appreciate your feedback much, thank you!

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[RoxyMel]

Hi again decofcards. On your second read I would say just slow it down just a bit and maybe just a little more expression. Again you have such a soothing voice quality. Keep up the good work!

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