[AlexS]

Hi, Earthbul. Man, your timbre is enviable for this type of copy. I think if you address just a couple of issues, I’m ready to tune into this nature special: (1) I hear several clicks and some juiciness in your narration–edit these out for smoothness or try another take with these mouth-noises in mind; and (2) I believe if you slow your pace down a bit to allow me to absorb the visuals of your narration (and images that would be on screen) that would make your good read greater. Well done! Best, Alex

[AlexS]

Hello VO Colleagues, and Belated HNY to you! May much success (and good health) characterize your ’23. Stylistic and Technical feedback welcome on this “Nike No Limit” recording. No direction given–just a link to a video with a staccato of athletic visuals echoing the copy. Your typical, iconic Nike intensity and aspiration. Thank you!

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[AlexS]

Thanks for the feedback, Becksflatt!

[AlexS]

Hello, fellow Voice Actors! Thank you in advance for your both your creative and technical feedback to these two commercial reads. Are they convincingly conversational? Is the diction Ok, and are the pacing and flow effective and reflective of the scripts? Any technical comments on the audio quality welcome too. I sincerely appreciate your critiques and direction. Thank you! Best, Alex

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