[AlexisVO]

Hi all, Looking for feedback please. Thanks! Alexis

Script for telephony:

Thank you for calling Abigail Jane’s Flowers,
your friendly neighborhood florist for weddings and all of your special occasions.
To speak with a floral consultant, press 1
To place an order, press 2
To speak with Genevieve Thompson in arranging, press 3
To speak with Abigail Jane Frailey, press 4
To leave a message in the company mail box, press 5

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[AlexisVO]

Thanks, Mary. I know what you mean there. I am working on not going to slow and not creating choppy pauses. Thanks for your feedback! –Alexis

[AlexisVO]

Hi John, Good reads! In both recordings I like your pace, inflection and clarity. In the PEI, I like how you handled the list starting with “Stories”, that was good pitch variation. Keep up the good work! –Alexis

[AlexisVO]

Nice job! I think the pace was good and the read had a good flow. –Alexis

[AlexisVO]

Nice read! Your calm tone and pace were a good match to the script. It had a PBS kind of vibe to it. I agree that in a few places the pauses between sentences were a bit long. (This is something I struggle with. It doesn’t seem that way when I read but listening back I am beginning to hear myself doing it.) My coach said to me during our last session on a particular script to slow down but don’t pause as much. It’s hard to wrap my head around but perhaps that could apply here as well. –Alexis

[AlexisVO]

Nice job, Kathy. Your voice is very calm and soothing and works well for telephony in my opinion. –Alexis

[AlexisVO]

Thanks, Chas! I appreciate your feedback. –Alexis

[AlexisVO]

Thanks, Kathy! That’s a good note about the emphasis on that. I appreciate your feedback. –Alexis

[AlexisVO]

Thanks, Mary! I appreciate your feedback. –Alexis

[AlexisVO]

Thanks, Holly! I appreciate your feedback. –Alexis

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