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  • in reply to: Feedback Forum #70104
    Alaya_R
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    Thank you for the feedback, Sheryl. I will be conscious of “severed” and “servered” next time. I am glad my mitochondrian voice was entertaining.

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #70085
    Alaya_R
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    Hello everyone! This may be my last upload before my narrative demo prep starts. Any and all feedback welcomed.

    Kids Activity TV
    Every day is an adventure with Activity TV. It’s the place to be for hundreds of Awesome activities in dozens of categories! Cartooning to magic to cooking and more – ready for you day or night. This month learn some gross out magic. Watch closely as Ryan teaches you to perform the severed finger trick!

    Partial Knee Replacement

    A partial knee replacement is an alternative to total knee replacement for some patients with osteoarthritis of the knee.
    This surgery can be done when the damage is confined to a particular compartment of the knee.
    In the past, partial knee replacement was reserved for older patients who were involved in few activities. Now, partial knee replacement is often preferred in the younger population as their recovery is quicker.

    Marvelous Mitochondrion
    Hi, I’m a Mitochondrion. But you can call me “Mito.” I’m called an “organelle” because I’m so tiny, but I’m really important. I’ve been called the powerhouse of a cell, because I’m how cells get their chemical energy. I generate most of a cell’s adenosine triphosphate, or ATP, from which your body in turn makes DNA, and other important molecules.

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    in reply to: Feedback Forum #69897
    Alaya_R
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    Hello Everyone,

    Any constructive criticism on the delivery of these three audio files much appreciated. Thank you!

    A Haunting Title
    In this world, there is real evil.
    In the darkest shadows and in the most ordinary places.
    These are the true stories of the innocent and the unimaginable, Between the world we see, and the things we fear.

    This Official Alaska Vacation Planning Video is filled with plenty of breathtaking scenes. But more important,
    it’s loaded with all the information you need for planning a trip to Alaska. Like when to go, what to wear, and what to see.
    So if you’ve got Alaska on your mind, you’re going to love this video. Let’s begin with snow sports. This is definitely the place.
    For cross-country and down-hill skiing. For snow boarding, tobogganing, and even ice fishing.

    This is the Lab Corp Fit sample collection procedure.
    Begin by filling in all the required information on the sampling bottle with a ballpoint pen.
    Place the supplied collection paper inside of the toilet bowl on top of the water.

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    in reply to: Feedback Forum #69215
    Alaya_R
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    Hello everyone,

    Looking for some constructive criticism on these audio files. Heading into my last few classes before my narration demo is recorded. Thanks!

    Children’s Educational Space Game
    Today we’re going to explore all of the planets in our solar system and some other places as well. We’ll travel into the future when astronauts live throughout the solar system. On each world we’ll see what the weather is like, what we would wear, and what we would do to have fun! Grab your oxygen, put on your seatbelt, and let’s blast off!
    Claude Debussey

    The notes you are hearing…changed the way we listen to music…not only classical…but contemporary as well. Claude Debussy, he heard things differently. He wasn’t very fond of rules and had no respect for the musical status quo. His influences still linger in the jazz music of today.

    TLC-VH1-Behind the Music
    Sickness, arson, and bankruptcy threatened to silence TLC forever. But when faced with the type of adversity that has ripped other groups apart, Tionne, Lisa, and Chili closed ranks. It seems as if the odds have been stacked against the members of TLC their entire lives. Long before they ever shared a stage, each endured poverty, the pain of a broken home, and the resolve to rise above it.

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    in reply to: Feedback Forum #68761
    Alaya_R
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    Hello everyone! I am posting some more practice reads for my upcoming narration demo. All constructive feedback would be appreciated. Thank you!

    American Airlines
    Welcome aboard American Airlines coast-to-coast service. We’ll be happy to do everything possible to make your flight with us a most pleasurable experience. We’ll provide you with all the information you need to know about your flight, your destination, and the equipment on which you are currently flying. In addition, we are proud to present our American Airlines feature film presentation, for our transcontinental passengers. We’d like you now to remove the plastic insert found directly in front of you in the seat back pocket. Please review the safety information during the flight for your own protection, in the unlikely event of an in-flight emergency.

    Young Living Essential Oils
    Thank you for calling Young Living Essential Oils
    If you know your party’s extension, please dial it now.
    To repeat this menu at any time, press 9.
    For Order tracking, press 1.
    For Sales, press 2

    UnStuck Audition
    Life is good. You’re sailing along. And then it happens.
    You hit a glitch.
    Maybe it’s a critical life moment—
    like deciding to change your job,
    or rekindling a relationship.
    Or maybe you’re stalled about something you want:
    trying to eat healthier,
    kickstarting a project,
    balancing home and work,
    finally dealing with that room in your home
    (you know the one).
    And there you are. Stuck.
    When you’re in the middle of being stuck it can feel alienating, confusing, and even a little scary.
    It’s okay. Really. (We find that people who want to live full lives are the ones who get stuck the most often.)

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    in reply to: Feedback Forum #68273
    Alaya_R
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    Hello! This is my first time posting in the feedback forum for constructive criticism. Please be gentle. Here are the scripts I used:

    The Annie E. Casey Foundation
    Every child deserves to grow up with opportunities to learn and thrive. With his skills, her talents, each is a potential leader, a contributor, a productive citizen. How kids grow up will determine their success as adults. But sadly, more than one in five children in America are growing up in poor families and poor neighborhoods, where the chance to thrive is anything but a given. The Annie E. Casey Foundation is dedicated to changing that.

    Gordon College
    Welcome to Gordon College!

    This tour begins just outside the tunnel that goes under College Drive near the flagpole.
    We will tour East campus first, followed by West Campus, and end the tour back here at the tunnel.

    Periodically, I will ask you to pause the recording so that you can walk to the next point or take a few minutes to independently tour the area.

    I will always use the word “pause” when you need to pause the recording.
    And I will always use the word “stop” when you need to stop walking while I continue speaking.

    This tour is intended to be listened to while walking around campus and does not include tours of any of the buildings. If you are taking this tour on a day when the buildings are open, please feel free to pause the recording and enter the buildings along the way.

    As you resume listening to the tour, remember to return to the location where you were last when you pushed pause on the recording.

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