[Akingsley19]

Hi Mary!

You definitely got the relaxed aspect in there and the background music was a nice touch! You sounded really clear and sounded great, but I definitely feel like a big smile while doing an up beat read like this would make it even better. The happiness and interest felt a little forced. All the best!

[Akingsley19]

Hello Everyone!

I tried a 7-11 script I found online for this one. Any feedback is welcome and appreciated. Thanks!

Script:

So it’s 2:00 in the morning…and you’re starving. Nothin’ in the fridge, and nothin’ in the cupboards. You don’t even have dog biscuits hangin’ around. You think about cooking, but then you remember the 3-alarm fire you started last time you tried using the stove. Well, check out 7-11. There’s gotta be one right near ya’. They have everything from burgers to tacos…24 hours a day…7 days a week. 7-11. Think of it as your own personal walk-in kitchen.

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[Akingsley19]

Hello Everyone,

I recorded the Advil script from the Edge Studio Library for practice. Any feedback is welcome! And any tips as well! I admittedly ran out of breath halfway through, but I felt like this was one of my better takes.

Thanks!

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[Akingsley19]

Hello Everyone!

I am giving a commercial read for homework on this one. I am really working on emotions on this read, but also a bit on diction/enunciation. I welcome all feedback and any tips you might have. Thanks!

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[Akingsley19]

I love the changing pitch in our voice! I can tell you have a bit of an accent, especially on words such as “soar”, but I think you gave a good read!

[Akingsley19]

Hello Everyone!
Thank you for the advice from my last post. I really tried to shift my focus to being less robotic and stilted. Still a ways to go on that front. Any advice or feedback is welcome!

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[Akingsley19]

Hello Everyone,
I kind of kept pushing off doing this, but I’m happy to finally put stuff out here on this forum. I did a made-up banking commercial for this one.

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[Akingsley19]

I love your voice! It feels suited to this reading and more! I love the delivery of facts and information and felt entertained. The only thing I can say beyond good things is that it felt like you were not very interested in the source material. Keep up the good work!

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