[AJS10]

Hello! I’ve attached two scripts that I’m using to practice for my Narrative demo: one for adult e-learning and the other is more biography/documentary. Would love some feedback. Thank you!

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[AJS10]

Hello! I’ve attached two scripts that I’m using to practice for my Narrative demo: one for adult e-learning and the other is more biography/documentary. Would love some feedback. Thank you!

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[AJS10]

Both are good! I think you could add a little more “smile” to your read with the Gerber copy. I especially liked the Lego copy, great ending!

[AJS10]

Sounds really good! In two sentences I felt like the last word was said too fast so it’s almost missed. “Tee shot” (I THINK that’s what you say?) in your first sentence… and when you say “wrestling match”, the word “match” is said super fast. But otherwise, sounds great!

[AJS10]

Hello! Would love some feedback on a couple of scripts I’ve been practicing. Thank you!

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[AJS10]

Wow, I honestly don’t think I have any critique… that sounded great!! Nice work!

[AJS10]

Hi Courtney! I agree… great reads! Re: AMEX, it felt a little bit like you lose a bit of energy on the last word of each sentence. Your voice goes down a bit and has a bit of vocal fry. This is a common issue with me and is something I’m working on so I guess that’s why it stuck out to me 🙂 Honey Bunches of Oats was great! I could really hear your smile towards the end!

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