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  • in reply to: Feedback Forum #74282
    1stassi
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    Hi guys I did a Disney script. Let me know how I sounded please. I have my demo record soon.

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    in reply to: Feedback Forum #74055
    1stassi
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    I love your voice for narration.
    I liked the read as well. The word fox is repeated alot so I would change pitching and tones to make it sound different. So everyone not just one pitch. Hope that makes sense.

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #74052
    1stassi
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    Hi everyone I’m practicing before my demo prep in a week. Please take a listen. Im working on not pitching down and making sure the clients name is visible. Please let me know how I did. Thanks

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    in reply to: Feedback Forum #73569
    1stassi
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    Hi Logan
    I loved your Hello Fresh read. Especially the middle line where it felt like we were having a face to face conversation.

    In fact my one suggestion would be to relax a little more and just remember to pretend that your having a conversation with one of your peers.

    Other than that GREAT JOB!

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #73568
    1stassi
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    Thank you @airbear57
    I appreciate the suggestions and will take that into account.

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #73565
    1stassi
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    Hi guys
    This is my last coaching session before the demo prep. I was wondering if you guys can focus on critiquing how I do on the clients name and if I get the problem/ solution right. Hope this makes sense.

    Go hard me guys. I’m trying to improve.

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    in reply to: Feedback Forum #73335
    1stassi
    Participant

    Hi Synge,

    I’m really tasting the pineapples on the your Freshii recording!
    Your voice is so inviting.

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #73332
    1stassi
    Participant

    Hi guys
    I hope I’m doing okay. I’m on my 4 session
    Here are two recordings I did for homework. Let me know what you think.

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    in reply to: Feedback Forum #73055
    1stassi
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    Hi you guys. I was pretty excited to do this script i just hope I sound good on the recording. Glad to hear you guys critique’s.

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    in reply to: Feedback Forum #73027
    1stassi
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    Hello ladies & gentlemen

    Here is another homework assignment. Take a listen and let me know what you guys think.

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