[maxspitz]

Hey Roman!

I wanna start off by saying I think you have an excellent vocal quality and sound, both really fit the spots you selected very well!

I’d say you could do a bit of work on pacing for both, but especially for the Home Depot. Mostly tightening the gaps a bit in between phrases and editing out breaths. I think you could also up the energy level and tone on the Ford one JUST A BIT to make it a bit more impactful. Other than that, I think you did an awesome job and they both really do sound great!

Hope this is helpful!
Max