[kfvoice]

HI there! Here is my feedback. I hope it helps! – Kathy

Overall, tighten up the reads on the first two scripts — don’t pause so long between sentences.

Script 1: I have found the Merriam-Webster website useful in double checking pronunciation of words, like for example, your read of stereoscopic. (https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/stereoscopic)

Script 3: I felt this was the best read. I would play around with the delivery of “It’s Nike“, with the emphasis on Nike. That is what you are selling, so billboard the word to make it stand out more (kind of like you did with E Class).