[mkell755]

Hi Toque, thanks for the feedback. Yeah for sounding more authentic! I’ve been working on that.

I too keep hearing about how we should sound more and more conversational, and to have a very specific listener in mind. I agree that there are so many quirky commercials with characters out there lately. I do think it depends on your audience, like who are you trying to convince to buy or do something? Is it a friend? A mentee? a Co-worker? A family member? Good questions. Thanks again!

Mary