[Amitofu]

I really like both of them! maybe the second a smidge better. Great job.

On the technical side, it sounds like you have a noise gate that is cutting a little too close to your words, kinda noticable fade away at the end of a couple phrases. Also, I don’t know if you’re using an EQ but perhaps look into something called demudding (I think. I’m not super-savvy). It sounds a little muffled.