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TIm Sullivan
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I loved that read!

One thing that did stick our for me was your final “s” sounds. The “s” is held a little long (“made from fresh ingredients” “expert chefs”) for example.

But, the tone is great. I don’t even have a dog, and I’m thinking about ordering some of this food!