[Elvie]

Hello,

I did a 2nd take on the Venice script. I naturally speak fast so I am trying to work on my pacing and enunciation. Please I welcome any feedback. Thank you for listening.

Venice has more than a thousand years of history behind it, but no one has ever seen it in exactly the same light or colors. Each hour, each minute, it changes its apparel of water and clouds, dazzling light and reflections. Venice…an ever-lasting, and ever-changing vacation.

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[Elvie]

Hi,

Here is read #3. Thank you for taking the time to listen. Welcome feedback. Thanks

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[Elvie]

Hello,

Here is a Travel script. I welcome all feedback. Thank you all!

#2 Venice
Venice has more than a thousand years of history behind it, but no one has ever seen it in exactly the same light or colors. Each hour, each minute, it changes its apparel of water and clouds, dazzling light and reflections. Venice…an ever-lasting, and ever-changing vacation.

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[Elvie]

Mary,

Well done!!! Bravo! I thought both were really great. The flow was smooth, clear, and friendly. Great job!

[Elvie]

Good job, my only feedback is the pacing is to slow from beginning to end. In the beginning you can start a little slow because you are in pain and nobody feels good when they are in pain. Then start slowing picking up the pace starting with “There is a solution”. You’ve taken Excedrin you should be feeling good, no more pain. Happy/Relief. Overall great work!

[Elvie]

I thought you read was excellent. I love the tone in your voice. You are really good for audiobooks, your pace and pauses were good, your telling of the memoir bought me in to want to hear more. Great job!

[Elvie]

Hello Everyone,

Feedback welcome. Thank you for listening.

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[Elvie]

Hi Bil-Bo, You are so talented. I love your voice. I have heard some of your other recordings and they all sound AMAZING!. The way you transition from characters to commercial such ease.

[Elvie]

Hi, I like the first one better. It seem you were more friendly, relatable and your read was more smoother on the first than the second one. Great work!

[Elvie]

Hello, My favorite was the haunting. You took it way down at slower pace and your read was good. For the Sandals I felt it too rush, maybe work on pacing. The JCPenny script did not seem like regular JCPenny script. Did you write it? the lottery was good, liked your energy. Overall great work!

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