[Wysvoice]

Hi I actually like the reads. Given that the spot is about how to increase sales using technology – I though the tone struck the right chord of “what are you doing and why aren’t you doing this – get with it”. As a salesperson myself, whenever I hear spots like that – it causes me to consider what the product or service could do for my business. The only part of the script that turned me off was the last 3 to 4 words – the tone and pitch up was a little to harsh for me. I thought a in inflection would have helped.

[Wysvoice]

I actually liked these reads. Given that the Hubspot piece is about educating the audience how to increase sales using technology – I think it’s helpful to sound like “hey what are you doing and why aren’t you doing this”. Having said that, the last three or four words the script sounded a little to snark in tone. I understood what you were trying to do with the script.

[Wysvoice]

Hello – This is my first entry here, hopeful participating more. Here is my take on a “how-to”

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[Wysvoice]

I really like this read, especially the first half. It drew me in with a good tempo, great tone and I felt your eyes were on me. As with long scripts, my challenge seems to be staying connected to the audience without getting lost in the words. It seemed that it may have been the challenge in this read, as well. Overall, if I were on the hiring end – I’d be intrigued enough by your read to give you a call back.

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