[voiceofkaralewis]

Commercial read homework for your performance feedback only. Thanks so much!

Sesame Place is the theme park where Sesame Street comes to life! New in 2018 is our biggest, most exciting roller coaster ever – Oscar’s Wacky Taxi! Bring the entire family to whirl on rides, splash down slides and hug everyone’s favorite furry friends. So before little kids become big kids, bring them to meet their Sesame Street friends at Sesame Place theme park!

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[voiceofkaralewis]

Hello, commercial read homework read #2, for your feedback on performance only. Thanks so much!!

Trendi.com. It’s the #1 shopping site for top name brands at up to 75% off. Great style, great value and everything ships free. Trendi.com. Everything you love, for less.

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[voiceofkaralewis]

Hello! I’d love to get your performance only feedback on my commercial read homework (recorded on iPad). Thanks so much for listening.

Peet’s Coffee
Characters like Marie. She’s a character. She does ballet. Professionally. Because character. That’s what we’re about. Alfred Peet. Now, there’s a character. He brought us craft roasted. Us, as in America. You. Me. Diane. Diane’s friend. At Peet’s, we source the best beans. We roast them. We brew them. We make great coffee. We’re Peet’s.

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[voiceofkaralewis]

This isn’t really a practice spot?! Sounds like something I’d hear on radio or TV… in other words it’s great!

[voiceofkaralewis]

SFish I love this read. The script suits your tone, pacing was on point and you sound like a Burt’s Bee user sharing your love for the product with a friend.

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