[vlwalinski]

Hi Everyone,

I’m working on prep for a commercial demo and attached is my homework assignment. Any feedback you could give would be great! Thank you for your help!

Best,
Veronica

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[vlwalinski]

Hi DB,

Your reads were great! Smooth, informative and good tone. I think you need a little bit more emphasis on certain words/phrases, such as the last line in Tough Mudders. I also really like the pacing in The Ravens. Wonderful job!

– Veronica

[vlwalinski]

Hi DB,

Thank you for taking the time to provide me feedback! I will slow down the pace, which is challenge for me! Thank you again for the encouraging comments!!!:-)

Best,
Veronica

[vlwalinski]

Hello Feedback Forum! In preparation for my VO coaching session, attached are two recordings for feedback. The Lipitor recording was a challenge because it’s written like a Webster’s definition, not a normal paragraph. Would love to hear your thoughts!

Best,
Veronica

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[vlwalinski]

Hi Erika, What a great read! Your voice is smooth, informative and reassuring. I agree with BJ about playing up “beta what?” and turning up the performance there:-)
-Veronica

[vlwalinski]

Hi Everyone,

Here are two recordings for my narration homework:-) Would love your feedback!
Best,
Veronica

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[vlwalinski]

Thank you taking the time to give me your feedback Daniel!!! I will fix those technical issues:-)

[vlwalinski]

Hi Artist7,
I love your energy in the Food Network recording. Your voice is smooth, fluid and clear with nice tone. I would add more energy to the NPR recording, especially toward the end. Both are very well done! -Veronica

[vlwalinski]

Hi Edge Studio Friends,

Attached are two reads for my VO homework:-)…a medical narration and a narration. Would love to hear your thoughts. Thank you!
-Veronica

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[vlwalinski]

Hi Everyone,

This is my first time posting to the Feedback Forum. I’m in the one-on-one coaching process for narration and commercials. I’m new to VO so any feedback on these two reads would be great! Thank you for your time!
-Veronica

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